Ok, well in the comment you said that you used an ND, but it does not look like this... The sky is blown out a lot. Now onto my critique. Well, first with the good bits: 1. I really like the shutter speed that you chose for the photograph. It works VERY well with the flowing water. It is in between of blurring it out and freezing it and it looks just nice. 2. I really like the colours of the trees and rocks - they are vivid and nicely saturated. 3. Good white balance to kind of fit it all together!
Now onto the bits that could be improved: 1. I would crop off from the top a little, to loose the sky, because it is blown out and does not add any detail into the photo. (I have just had to do that to one of my landscapes and it looked better without it ) 2. The bit of rock to the left of the frame, in the middle of the water pool is a little bit distracting since you can't see the rest of it. 3. Maybe the photo could be a little bit brighter, because light would suit it better as it is natural beauty.
Ok, well I think thats all that I have to comment! I really like this photo and thats why I wrote this critique. I hope I have helped!!
I think you might consider cropping out the sky above the green.. if you hold your hand over that the remaining image is wonderful..vibrant color and details
I followed your advice and updated this one Hope you like the new version more? Thanks for the suggestion, I think it really improved the image as the sky really was just a waste of space
1. I really like the shutter speed that you chose for the photograph. It works VERY well with the flowing water. It is in between of blurring it out and freezing it and it looks just nice.
2. I really like the colours of the trees and rocks - they are vivid and nicely saturated.
3. Good white balance to kind of fit it all together!
Now onto the bits that could be improved:
1. I would crop off from the top a little, to loose the sky, because it is blown out and does not add any detail into the photo. (I have just had to do that to one of my landscapes and it looked better without it
2. The bit of rock to the left of the frame, in the middle of the water pool is a little bit distracting since you can't see the rest of it.
3. Maybe the photo could be a little bit brighter, because light would suit it better as it is natural beauty.
Ok, well I think thats all that I have to comment!
Good Luck with future development and photography
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